The next essay you will read is a Career Reflection essay called "Ten Year Vision," which is similar to the essay you just read.
You will need to download the essay to see the comments. Once you have downloaded the essay there will be comment bubbles on the right side of your screen. Click on the bubbles to read the comments. Please make sure to pay very close attention to the comments. The Self-check questions on the Reading refer to these as much as they refer to the content of the essay. In fact, much of the instruction on how you will write your own essay of this kind can be found in the notes associated with the Readings.
Career Reflection Example 2: Ten Year Vision (Google Doc)